Chasing Rainbows

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Storm clouds finally passed us by the sun shines over head; rainbow spans across the sky with brilliant hues instead. Hues of every color known to spectrum far and wide; beauty now by nature shown, an offering of pride. We’ve been chasing rainbows now forever and a day; searching for that pot of gold, and love along the way. As we gaze upon this sight, this rainbow up above; thinking now the time is right to consummate our love. Fulfilling all our fantasies in hopes that love’s not blind; chasing rainbows to appease these dreams held in our mind. June 6, 2019

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2019 12:30:00 PM

A Rainbow was Gods promise to Noah after Noahs Ark found dry land on top of a mountain, that he would not flood the earth again. Sad that Rainbows come and go so quickly, but what a spectacle they make in the sky, almost like a fairy tale, like twinkles that, now you seem them now you don't! A beautiful write - and a wonderful win, congrats dear John. Hugs, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2019 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Jenn, for me it's always a magical moment to see a rainbow in the sky after a summer shower. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/9/2019 8:31:00 PM

I am happy to see this has won. There is something magical about this. :) Congratulations John. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 6/9/2019 8:50:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, daydreams can be so magical, anything is possible. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2019 11:17:00 AM

This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Love whispers softly along the colors of the sky. :) A favorite for me. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 6/6/2019 12:00:00 PM

Brandy, thank you so much for your beautiful comments. Sometimes love is just a whisper in the wind adorned by the colors of the rainbow. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, thank you for the fav my sweet friend. John

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/6/2019 6:48:00 AM

A wondrous sight more so to behold after having read through these early eyes that awaits the trade of twilight's rest and the launch of dawn John, Aloha William

John Gondolf
Date: 6/6/2019 7:18:00 AM

Aloha, William, and welcome to the new day. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John