Chasing Dreams

The song of dawn leaves a spider's web in dew
 Its silken threads bejeweled in morning light
 The opulence  of the sky in golden hue
 Causes birds to exult in chirps of delight

 With an impetus to find nectar's embrace,
 Where flowers adorn  gardens with beauty and grace
 Butterflies give each flower a tender kiss
 As they enjoy the taste of nature's bliss

Fluttering between the chasm of earth and sky
  they dance upon the summer breeze
 The vicarious heart of a child flies high
 As he chases after them with ease

 Running after an endless summer dream
 Catching  rays of sunshine's gleam
 Making a mockery of impossible schemes
 Getting his heart's desire as he so deems
                             ~
 8-19-18
 Eight Word Challenge-8 Contest
 Sponsor: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Harper Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 8:16 PM
You capture the connectedness and beauty of nature, lovely.
Barden Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Joseph - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations, Joseph on your grand win. with a beautiful poem.
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations for you excellent win ! :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:21 PM
This is one of the very best writes in my contest, congrats Joseph!
May Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Thank you for my top placement John
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Very beautiful work with those eight words, Joseph, I could conceive it in a negative way only, yours is 'naturally' bright and positive:)
Dutta Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Words are nicely set. All the best.
Man Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Like a sanguine song this write instantly put me into a really good, upbeat, fast moving mood! Fabulous work, Joseph!!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 9:55 AM
This is perky and fresh with a feel good upbeat. The words are colorful and tap into emotions conjured by their imagery. An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the canvas of dreams. Emile.
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:55 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Joseph..a summer scene wrapped in dreams.
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Beautifully written Joseph! I enjoyed this very much :)
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