Chasing a Feeling

I see no meaning in the sun-drenched leaves, 
That scatters the evening light so lovely.
I see no beauty in the barks of trees,
Reflected on the golden pond beneath.
A toddler chases a distraught pigeon. 
The little ones face overflowing joy,
He stumbles like a tiny drunken man.
I bet he feels the meaning of his ploy.

I see a park devoid, unlike the boy.
Gregarious collective I dismiss,
Emotion and matter collide and this?
This numb awareness of things, I am coy.
I remember feeling just like that tot,
Sun on my face and my heart filled the lot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mcgovern Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Nicely done. Like it!
Mills Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 11:27 AM
what a lovely poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem! Love, Susan
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 2:34 PM
David, this sounds sad...Aren't children interesting to watch ....The joy that they get from such minor happenings...The joy of seeing them learn about their world...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sorry that I have been so long in returning the comments for I have been on vacation...Sara
Hilliker Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 9:17 AM
I love the first three lines - so expressive.
Devonshire Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 11:15 AM
It seems we lose of lot of our joy as we mature, David, and react to things differently as well. Truth in your words. Very nice reflection on life. Love, Carolyn
Shrivastava Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Sad...very well written.....
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 11:27 PM
hey was this for that feeling contest? this sure is good writing, David! Luv, andrea
A   Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 10:27 PM
yes lovely, wow to the good emotions. enjoyed, have your self a good one,..p.d.
Delacroix Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 9:30 PM
Oh, and thank you for your comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.
Delacroix Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM
To a child, everything is an expression of love. There is no concept of anything bad or of no beauty until he or she gets hurt and I don't mean stumble by that, that;s quickly forgotten. We can all still find that child like nature within. It is there even if it's dormant. Nice write, David. This experience made you think of when you were a child.
Chachere Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:23 PM
it's nice to see small children playing and having their joy.they deserver nothing more, other than to be spoiled(: -Always&Forever Lynette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Sweet one David... your Sonnets are so stirring and moving ...emotion unfolds so easily.. thankxx for your ever gracious comments on my poetry reds... glad u enjoy reading them...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 6:36 PM
A nice Italian sonnet. Nice rhyming.
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