Charnel House

a clock strikes twelve - -
the old charnel house door
creaks open

for Tracie’s Scary Ku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 12:49 AM
Ah ah Jack..But do we go inside?? enjoyed reading today..)
A   Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Jack, hope you are well, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 2:01 PM
again, i am really loving these ones toward the bottom of the list!! Congrats. Yours is wonderful, Jack and I hope you are getting thru the day ok. thinking of you in your mourning time.
Liwayway Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 10:27 AM
Big Congratulations to you friend Jack for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs! Maria
Gorelick Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:41 AM
OHweeeee...those squeaky doors get me every time. Congrats. BG
Brown Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations on your spooky ku win Jack xx
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 12:34 AM
SUPER CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A TERRIFIC SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN MY FRIEND .. MISS U MUCH .. HOPE THINGS R STABLE FOR U ..
Collins Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Hi Jack - Dictionary nearby, I've learned a new delicious word 'Charnel" Creepy indeed. love, Kathy
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:11 PM
A TASTE OF SUSPENSE JACK LUV .. THE CHRMED WORDS U PEN WILL GARNISH U A SUPER WIN LUV ..
Wellington Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Ooooo...scary! Best wishes Jack, thanks for visiting. One love, Joy Wells
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Hope they know what a charnel house is hon? [creaks as it opens] Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Yes, this one leaves much to the imagination as to what could happen..Great work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for the visits to my work..You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers..Sara
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October 21, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Yes!! I love this contest, I get to read spooky Haiku, awesome! You write is one of the best my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible write this afternoon! What a delightfully scary piece, Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:09 AM
YES!!! A brilliant way to do a shortcut again. I love it!
Squyres Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Soooo makes me want to see what's behind the creaking door, with my eyes covered of course..lol Very good !!
A   Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 7:31 AM
Hi Jack...I don't know about you... but this is a house I do not want to be around midnight. ... I like your ku... Tracie will too.... good luck....pd
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