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Noontide cordial sun immerse golden spheres Birch and aspen leaves rhythmically quake Susurrate deep in quietness appears Timidly on soft earth shadow path wake There, where nesting birds await safely perch, While conceal sweet are their audible waft. Cool breeze twine spider's web and bees who search Stunning unadorned simple-ness echoes soft. Lone senior British oak outstretch thick arm Grasp weathered fraying pendulous tire swing; Mid saffron blaze whilst it mingles off charm Espy hushed cries for mortal yielding wings. Lush meadow pigments an emerald green Self quenching natures pulsing rapture scene. 2/9/2020

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Date: 2/12/2020 7:24:00 AM
what a beautiful sonnet sweet Eve, congrats on your win with this lovely poem. Be blessed x:-)
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Date: 2/12/2020 4:25:00 AM
Very sweet description. And I learnt a new word - to susurrate. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/11/2020 8:54:00 PM
Certainly a 'pulsing rapture scene!' A fine sonnet, Eve. Lovely! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:00:00 PM
A simply delightful picture Eve. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/10/2020 1:14:00 AM
When you write on nature you always excel iin beauty. A lovely sonnet, Eve. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/10/2020 5:51:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/9/2020 11:29:00 PM
cordial sun...aspen leaves...Susurrate deep..Lone senior British oak..hushed cries.. Poetic beauty.. Nature at the best.. Fantastic imagery..
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/10/2020 5:51:00 AM
thank you