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In and out, with ribbons held round and round the Maypole- charming patterns made; around, around- in and out- weaving purpose in their dance. In and out, our days of life- round and round- through the years, building as we go; around, around- in and out, weaving patterns of our life. Over, under, and then braid- we weave our days, one by one; layers make them strong. Beauty of those patterns made- deepens as our years go by. In and out, our days of life, round and round through the years, charming patterns made; over, under in and out- weaving purpose of our life. October 1, 2021 Revision of a poem posted Jan 17, 2015

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Date: 10/1/2021 7:38:00 PM
I do like how you woven a maypole to our life.. just perfect . Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/19/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs, Sandra

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