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Charming

A picnic basket I will bring Inside will be most everything I know you like, and also more I'll pick to try from favorite store A picnic blanket where we'll sit The grass so green, your hair sunlit I'll lay straight back upon one arm And take you in, all of your charm The attributes that you imbue They turn me upside down, it's true I'm not a silly goose you see It's really your effect on me The afternoon, a lazy day Spent just with you, no work, all play And it will still get better yet It won't be long until sunset

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Date: 4/25/2024 2:29:00 PM
Very nice! The picnic basket, charming. Love verse 3.
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Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 4/26/2024 1:29:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/25/2024 9:57:00 AM
Cute and sweet!! Enjoy the picnic!
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Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 4/26/2024 1:29:00 PM
Thank you

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