Charming

A picnic basket I will bring
Inside will be most everything 
I know you like, and also more
I'll pick to try from favorite store

A picnic blanket where we'll sit
The grass so green, your hair sunlit
I'll lay straight back upon one arm
And take you in, all of your charm

The attributes that you imbue 
They turn me upside down, it's true
I'm not a silly goose you see
It's really your effect on me

The afternoon, a lazy day
Spent just with you, no work, all play
And it will still get better yet
It won't be long until sunset
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Very nice! The picnic basket, charming. Love verse 3.
Bigote Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Thank you
Kulkarni Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Cute and sweet!! Enjoy the picnic!
Bigote Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Thank you
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