Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Charm the Pants Off

I'm way down the track, over eighty by golly
But my choo-choo has yet to run off the trolley
Still eat by myself
I'm in pretty good health
Still charm the pants off some cute young dollies

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Charmaine Chircop October 14, 2016 at 8:16 AM You do dear Santa : )lol Jack Ellison October 14, 2016 at 8:20 AM CHARMAINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My apologies for my absence!!! Still love you a bunch! Sweetness defines you and alway has!!! Aww so nice to hear from you, sweet soul... love you a bunch STILL, Jack xxxxxx

Cecilia Macfarlane October 10, 2016 at 8:37 PM Awesome write Jack, your charm is unique and made me smile. Hugs Jack Ellison October 11, 2016 at 7:51 AM WOWSERS!!! You are so sweet... thanks a bunch dear friend!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith October 10, 2016 at 9:15 AM His I D might say he's old...but that's not what I'm told... he's limber and spry...not at all shy...and keeps the dollies warm when they're cold Jack Ellison October 11, 2016 at 7:52 AM LOL!!!! Used to be shy way back when... BUT not now!!! LOL

Lim'Rik Flats October 10, 2016 at 8:54 AM Dollies and follies and furgles and beer//Jackson has hair growing out of his ear//His teeth must still work//He's not yet berserk//so girlies have you no fear! / How bout dem Jays? I hope they don't disappoint you again this year. Jack Ellison October 11, 2016 at 7:53 AM JAYS ALL THE WAY!!! (I hope!) GOOD GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!

Daniel Turner October 10, 2016 at 8:16 AM Jack, does it make it easier to get away with, the older one gets. I'm looking forward to patting a few rumps:) Love the humor. Jack Ellison October 11, 2016 at 7:54 AM YES!!! Happy patting! LOL

Jan Allison October 10, 2016 at 7:34 AM ha ha ha never lose that sense of fun Jack:-) hugs jan xx Jack Ellison October 10, 2016 at 7:42 AM Hi Sis!!! Methinks you're responsible for reminding me of the great bunch of sweet peeps there are here in the Soup!!! Love and hugs, Bro!!! xxx