Charlieku

Life is so 
  fleeting
    why do we waste
        chances for
           kindness
              perfectly placed?

Love is no 
   use if
      left undeclared.
         By words or
            deeds it
               needs to be shared.

And if our 
   hearts seek
       genuine peace,
           pride, hate and envy
               first need release.

Happiness
   comes when
       with thankful hearts,
           we share with 
               others
                   gifts God imparts.

Thus if we
   act with
      goodwill and grace
         we’ll leave this
             world a 
                far better place.

13/10/18



3/2/4 syllable count
'Charleku contest'  : Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Daniel Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Excellent set of Charlieku, Wendy:) congratulations:)
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for such kind comments, Jo! Now for the hard bit - t attempt to live up to my sentiments!
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your great win in this Senryu contest.. great verses
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Eve, it's so kind of you to take the time to comment in such a positive way. Thank you.
Devonshire Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:08 AM
As I become more familiar with your work, Wendy, I am very impressed by your creativity an writing talent. Your wonderful Charlieku are worthy of first-place honors. Congratulations! Carolyn
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:35 PM
What a wonderful comment to receive, Carolyn. I only started writing verse a few months back and have been so encouraged by reading excellent examples on this site and also positive feedback on my own. Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Your approach was different putting them two together that way. Very creative and I loved the ending you gave it. congrats.
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm having such fun rekindling my dormant imagination after years of neglect!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:57 PM
beautifully penned Wendy:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:36 PM
You are a continual encouragement. Thank you, Jan!
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Lovely, Wendy. Congrats on your well deserved top honors.
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:38 PM
I enjoy both your own poetry and your warm encouragement of others,Line. Thank you so much!
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October 23, 2018 at 2:30 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Wendy :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. It's very kind of you to take the time to comment.
Messina Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 10:13 PM
I love the way you did this, Wendy. Such a beautiful poem you have penned. Truly a gem. Congratulations on your top win...Charlie
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:41 PM
I'm honoured! Thank you so much for the recognition in your contest, Charlie.
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Like how you done this Wendy, Good luck. Tom.
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you again, Tom. You're a continual encouragement.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 1:34 AM
goodwill and grace. Great words, I rarely think to use. Thank you Wendy for reminding me of these wonderful words in your terrific CharlieKu. Nicely put!
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:42 PM
You're very kind, Caren. Now I just have to put poetry into practice!
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