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Charleston Merman

We were vacationing in the state of palm trees and seashore in September's mild loveliness. Me, a sexagenarian widow, hobbled by arthritis in my knees. As my family enjoyed the surf, I sat contented on a creaking wooden pier, taking in the salted breeze tossing my gray hair. I heard the seawater beneath me ripple, then a splash, and a masculine, "Hello," there in the mossy colored brine was he. His long brunette hair flecked with sun kissed gold, it was entwined with tiny conch shells. His build of brawn and burnished skin, eyes of an amber hue. Handsome in oceanic resplendence- I then realized he was a merman! As his iridescent lower body of sapphire scales and magnificent fins swirled in the foaming waters, I thought what would such a youthful merman want with an elderly woman like me, when there were younger women bringing their charms to the sea? He spoke again, and I was mesmerized, "You were once a maiden, a strong swimmer of the waves," he mysteriously smiled, "King Poseidon remembers his people of the deep, although you are aged and infirm, your soul is of the aqueous realm, and know this message I give to you today, while you sleep neath the late summer moonlight tonight, we merpeople love you for your caring of our vast oceans and their life." He reached out his strong hand momentarily, and placed a perfect pink pearl into my outstretched hand. His eyes so captivating that I never wanted to stop gazing into them. As he softly bid me a farewell, his fins slapped the waters, as waiting dolphins leapt in happy unison, and he disappeared beyond the edge of the pier. Charleston Merman, I'll never forget you, a sweet nautical memory, as the perfect pink pearl is displayed on white velvet on my nightstand. ~

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Date: 4/29/2024 5:38:00 AM
Ahh!! What a romantic tale you have told in poetic form. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/30/2024 2:17:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Sara. I really enjoyed writing it. I hope you have a pleasant late April evening of creativity. xox
Date: 4/25/2024 11:35:00 PM
Brilliantly constructed fantasy story. Loved its unfolding tale.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/27/2024 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, poetry friend!
Date: 4/23/2024 4:24:00 PM
loved this story of Charleston Merman...a creative and captivating write with its delightful imagery and magical lines. A true delight. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/24/2024 5:00:00 AM
Thank you kindly, dear poetry friend. May you have a creative and inspirational poetry day. God's loving blessings to you. ~
Date: 4/23/2024 12:49:00 PM
Regina, Words fail me as I gaze in awe at this whirlwind of glittering imagery underpinned and indeed nourished to its emotive denouement by a very striking, visual narrative. I have been emboldened by your fortitude and stoic conviction. Your spirit will never wane Your comments on my “Clued“ piece I cherish always Howard
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/24/2024 4:58:00 AM
A most beauteous and thoughtful comment, Howard. Thank you so much. Have a grand creative day full of inspiration, my good poetry friend. ~
Date: 4/23/2024 11:25:00 AM
This enchanting poem transports the reader into a realm of magical realism, where the mundane beauty of a seaside vacation transforms into a profound encounter with the mystical. Through the eyes of a sexagenarian widow, we are invited to experience a moment of unexpected wonder and connection with the natural world.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/24/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One, for your thoughtful and kind comment on my poem. May you have a grand and inspirational day. All the best to you. ~
Date: 4/23/2024 10:58:00 AM
Wow,Regina, an incredibly, masterful write and a FAV. I admire your talent plus Imaginative skills. I liked the part where he gave you a pink pearl. It is a delight to read a piece like this because I can relate to it, Finally, you are in no way elderly, in spirit or body. Yes, many of us have pain walking but you are not 80! Stay young hearted. I am and old enough to be your others ! Hope this is a POTD, Love you, Pangie Xx, The title is a true delight and original
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Regina Elliott
Date: 4/23/2024 11:22:00 AM
My deepest gratitude, dear friend Pangie, for loving this poem, and the very thoughtful and supportive FAV! We are going to Charleston, SC this coming Sept 1 for a week in a rental home, but my imagination has already been there, lol, couldn't wait to write. Thank you so very much, sweet friend! xoxx

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