Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Chariots

Chariots


Battlefield dawn,
Mortals rise high,
Chariots sigh,
Sound of bugle,

Bows shoot arrows,
And swords rattle,
Armoured mettle,
Red soil of dusk !



Written on 4/8/14
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Theme- Chariot
Contest- Ride on a pathya va
Sponsor- Nette onclaud


Awarded 7th place

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Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 7:33 PM Great war scene, I can picture it perfectly, Grats on your win!!!!

Early Jae August 11, 2014 at 4:52 PM This is really cool, I can see this epic battle, congrats!!!

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2014 at 6:57 AM the terror of a quest so well told, dr. upma.. thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs

Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:29 AM dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani August 10, 2014 at 6:22 AM looks like an inspiration from the Mahabharta battlefield. fine win, Congrats Upma. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 5:39 AM Nice battle scene penned so well, Dr. Upma. congrats

Verlena S. Walker August 5, 2014 at 12:46 PM Beautiful personification Dr. Sharma... Lovely write... GL in the contest... LVerlena

Dr Anuradha Moogi August 5, 2014 at 3:20 AM Beautiful!!!!!

Shadow Hamilton August 4, 2014 at 7:32 PM powerful pen Dr Upma that says much gl in contest hugs

David Mohn August 4, 2014 at 7:31 PM Great use of few syllables...looks like a tough form to master...good luck on this one Dr. Upma

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 5:00 PM gosh you are right in there with a poem for her. I will probably take a few days to come up with one!! Good luck. Enjoyed the imagery of this.

J. R. Corbin August 4, 2014 at 11:53 AM A world of visions in just a few words. Very nice! Good luck with the contest.

Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 11:27 AM Lovely imagery and I found the final line so chilling Dr Sharma! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 11:30 AM Thanks Jan !