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Chariots

Chariots Battlefield dawn, Mortals rise high, Chariots sigh, Sound of bugle, Bows shoot arrows, And swords rattle, Armoured mettle, Red soil of dusk ! Written on 4/8/14 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma Theme- Chariot Contest- Ride on a pathya va Sponsor- Nette onclaud Awarded 7th place

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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/11/2014 7:33:00 PM
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Great war scene, I can picture it perfectly, Grats on your win!!!!
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Early Jae
Date: 8/11/2014 4:52:00 PM
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This is really cool, I can see this epic battle, congrats!!!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/11/2014 6:57:00 AM
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the terror of a quest so well told, dr. upma.. thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:29:00 AM
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dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/10/2014 6:22:00 AM
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looks like an inspiration from the Mahabharta battlefield. fine win, Congrats Upma. Mohan
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
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Nice battle scene penned so well, Dr. Upma. congrats
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/5/2014 12:46:00 PM
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Beautiful personification Dr. Sharma... Lovely write... GL in the contest... LVerlena
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Dr Anuradha Moogi
Date: 8/5/2014 3:20:00 AM
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Beautiful!!!!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/4/2014 7:32:00 PM
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powerful pen Dr Upma that says much gl in contest hugs
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David Mohn
Date: 8/4/2014 7:31:00 PM
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Great use of few syllables...looks like a tough form to master...good luck on this one Dr. Upma
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2014 5:00:00 PM
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gosh you are right in there with a poem for her. I will probably take a few days to come up with one!! Good luck. Enjoyed the imagery of this.
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J. R. Corbin
Date: 8/4/2014 11:53:00 AM
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A world of visions in just a few words. Very nice! Good luck with the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 11:27:00 AM
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Lovely imagery and I found the final line so chilling Dr Sharma! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2014 11:30:00 AM
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Thanks Jan !

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