Charcoal

Gold on the mountain Charcoal in early sky Spirit lifted high

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Sharon Winter

Date: 12/4/2009 7:44:00 AM

Beautiful haiku! Thanks Sara for your kind congrats on my feature last week. Sorry to be so late. love, shar

James Fraser

Date: 12/3/2009 12:40:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Sara >> James

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/3/2009 11:32:00 AM

Masterfully done haiku....so few words yet such a vivid image one can see in their mind. Thanks so much for sharing~M

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2009 2:01:00 PM

I love the colors and feeling of this haiku. Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry! ~Juliane

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/1/2009 8:45:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku. Nice to create a feeling for Nature and what is happening with it. I have also posted a poem on Nature. Hope you would like it. Best wishes and love Ravindra

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/1/2009 6:32:00 AM

This Haiku is very pretty imagery and thoughtfulness.. lends itself to the third line ...and keeps one there for a while. excellent , Sara. thank you -Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2009 5:52:00 AM

Spirit lifted high .. nice to begin the day with uplifting thoughts from your haiku this morning Sara.. luv the title and your thoughts here... blessings ... luv... thanxxx for enjoying my postings too today.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/1/2009 5:18:00 AM

pretty one mom, good job!!