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Chaos Myth

If I Knew that Chaos was Observational Mythology, that all things are Strictly predetermined, I would not want to hear that My power of observation determines the course of reality as it comes. That would be too convenient.

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Date: 5/23/2009 4:17:00 PM

Much to think about in your words. Nice use of this challenging form. I really like the power and truth in the 8th line. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/23/2009 6:44:00 AM

Yoni, we could all use convenience, don't you think>>>? Ok. It would be too easy. I enjoyed your write. Dane

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/22/2009 3:33:00 PM

i love your style of writing. stretch the boundaries and create, my friend. well done