Chaos Myth

If
I
Knew that
Chaos was
Observational
Mythology, that all things are
Strictly predetermined, I would not want to hear that
My power of observation determines the course of reality as it comes.

That would be too convenient.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 23, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Much to think about in your words. Nice use of this challenging form. I really like the power and truth in the 8th line. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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April 23, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Yoni, we could all use convenience, don't you think>>>? Ok. It would be too easy. I enjoyed your write. Dane
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April 22, 2009 at 3:33 PM
i love your style of writing. stretch the boundaries and create, my friend. well done
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