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Chaos In Laos

Looked up and down, right and left
Wondering why life suffers a theft
Subtracted beauty from my chin cleft
 
If I deserved and preserved the best
My love could lavish to attest
Why my love passed a preset test
 
Under dodgy durations of circumstances
Pummeling endeavours made in instances
That diminished and dwindled distances
 
Acknowledged to reveal robust character
On a bus, on a train, on foot, on a tractor
Where we determined adversity no longer a factor
 
In consolidating the love we feel
Grows  by leaps and bounds despite the bill
Your family sprang on me to deal and kill
 
The foundations you and I have built
Over the years to fight to the hilt
Any machinations to pour heaps of silt
 
Into our love cogs
Meaning  love should don cogs
Saunter under coercion in bogs and fogs
 
To prove its strength
Walking on hot coals at length
If truth should pervade and invade love width
 
To delight your parents
So worried and harried by overdue rents
We owe for domestic tents
 
That accommodate our nights and days
Mondays, Tuesdays, Wednesdays 
Thursdays, Fridays, Saturdays and Sundays
 
Shared with supreme care
Far beyond compare
Even when evil eyes stare
 
Willing you and I could disintegrate
To delight the flight of the ingrate
Who  wishes our relationship could migrate
 
Into Dante's Hades
Struck by full blown Aids
Enfeebled and disabled in beds
 
Where to detractors we surrender
Stuck owing bucks to the vendor
Who  dares to crush our love in his blender
 
Administering his coup the grace
As we lie panting on yellow grass
Listening to soothing sounds of brass
 
Whispering osculation and consolation
Amid an attempt at immolation
Our love sustains not in isolation
 
But in tandem
With a hustled harem
Which sings its ultimate knell anthem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/29/2019 5:44:00 PM
Hello John Sensele, yes there is chaos no matter where you are. Nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.
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