Chaos and Harmony

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In the beginning, there was Chaos, Hesiod*  
of old tells us 
then 
with the passing of time and the intervention of the divine,
slowly and persistently, the order was established 
but
Chaos has not disappeared at all as it is lurking:
into the core of Cosmos-
into every heart
into every mind 
and
into every soul

waiting 

for the right moment to strike
to overthrow harmony and back to anarchy, triumphantly, us
to bring.

Imperative it is, therefore,
with each step we take, 
vigilant we have to be, my friend, 
questioning 
everything that concerns us-
our being
our dreams
our becoming 
thus
advisable for us would be
never accept something at 
face value 

but
 
on the contrary, we should, everything that concerns us 
in-depth to examine
so, 
good would be, suspicion's shield high to raise 
for 
to protect the inner order that we have so painstakingly achieved, 
and 
by doing so, to Chaos victims we would 
never fall!










© Demetrios Trifiatis
    03 February 2020


    
* Hesiod, an ancient Greek poet, lived between 750-650 BC, author of Theogony!

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Date: 2/3/2020 10:43:00 AM
chaos can make us come undone if we let it...so much better life is without any chaos and something i try to avoid if at all possible, though it is around us all the time... good write Demetrios :) hugs
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Date: 2/3/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for your understanding dearest, Sandra. Hugs xxx
Date: 2/3/2020 9:25:00 AM
So much wisdom in these poetic words my friend--excellent advice you give to overcome hurdle of chaos and bring about harmony.
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Date: 2/3/2020 1:02:00 PM
You too kind my friend, Vijay. Wisdom belongs to the divine and some times is reflected upon a thankful soul. God bless you !
Date: 2/3/2020 7:45:00 AM
Chaos, confrontation and conflict are in the process of displacing reason in the world ... Creating order in the chaos ... a mental cleansing session ... when life pushes us out of balance :) - Excellent written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2020 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious visit and comment dearest, Ann-Lise! Hugs xxx
Date: 2/3/2020 5:49:00 AM
So true Demetrios, without order chaos will reign supreme, we have come a long way but as you say it lurks beneath. I often wonder with the state of the world now, has chaos got a foothold. In the future, poets will add notes with their work quoting words from a wise poet from Greece by the name of Demetrios. Tom
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Date: 2/3/2020 6:44:00 AM
You humble my my generous friend, Tom! Only our Lord is wise! We just become less and less ignorant! Thank you very much for your gracious comment! Blessings!
Date: 2/3/2020 5:39:00 AM
Sad it is, that what once was taken on face value, and handshakes cannot be anymore. You are so right, chaos rears its ugly head if one is not vigilent, and so good it would be, suspicion's shield high to raise. Great advice....Maria xxx
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Date: 2/3/2020 6:40:00 AM
I am delighted to see you here commenting dearest friemd, Maria! Thank you so much for your kind words! Hugs xxx
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