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Chantale's Birthday Party

Late to the party we arrived at seven At least we showed up before eleven Sweet Ginette, joined us both at the door A bottle in my hand ready to pour Off to the kitchen to see the Birthday Queen All the happy faces a beautiful scene Hugs for Chantale, another for Helene I met a new person, energetic like a teen Her name if I remember, it is Jocelynne She is married, to a cool guy his name Martin Bruno was cooking but stopped to say hi Christine looked happy to be with her guy Jokes and conversation, a whole lot of fun Happy to spend time with everyone Dave seemed content enjoying the mood My stomach grumbled, I was ready for food To the table it was time to sit down We were all treated, to the best meal in town First Chantale prayed a blessing on us Our Savior is great, he deserves a fuss The meal fantastic but the Tuna was raw I tried to eat it but it stuck in my craw My Mary she enjoyed it, although not me I prefer all things cooked, that come from the sea The pasta amazing, seafood galore The wine was superb, I let Christine pour She sat to my left, Dave sat to my right Everyone there, made it a perfect night Once concluded, Christine C sang a song A Louis Armstrong tune we all joined along Her voice was clearest ours more like a croak We were lost in the moment, that's not a joke. We all started dancing, disco moves on the floor Armand turned up the sound, as we screamed for more First time I saw Dave dance, he cuts quite the rug Armand has his own moves, he likes the Jittery Bug Before too long it was time for dessert Hot from all the candles I unbuttoned my shirt Chantal blew out the candles after making two wishes Armand served Mary's cake, on rectangular dishes Chantale's special day, a day to remember Celebrated each year, October not November So we raised our glasses, thankful for the cheer Together we celebrated a friend who is dear!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/24/2019 5:53:00 PM
Hi Richard, I liked the rhythmic pace of this. Reading it was like riding a horse. It was just nice, by which I mean it was a pleasant change from the regular stuff that aims high and ends low. I really did enjoy this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2019 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Eric, I forgot I wrote this one.
Date: 11/9/2014 8:20:00 AM
This is the way to capture memorable moments in poetry. Your images are more vivid than any camera could produce.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, it was a fun one to write.
Date: 11/2/2014 10:24:00 AM
I have to fave this poem for personal reasons. Lovely write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 10:57:00 AM
Sorry, I am behind on my responses. Thanks once again Maurice, you are most kind my friend.
Date: 10/31/2014 12:37:00 PM
Nicely written Richard. Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Verlena. ;0)
Date: 10/27/2014 4:54:00 PM
Poetically very lovely poem Richard! :) it sounds like you had a blast. . ..I enjoyed your party...I mean your poem..lol.. Love and light! xxx D.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 10:59:00 AM
Yes we had a great time. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 10/27/2014 10:20:00 AM
smiling richard truly a treasure piece beautifully penned dear friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 11:00:00 AM
A belated thanks my friend.
Date: 10/27/2014 8:49:00 AM
Fabulous time u must hv had ! Well captured memorable moments Richard! God bless u my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 11:01:00 AM
May he bless you as well Upma.
Date: 10/27/2014 8:21:00 AM
What a nice party! I do like sushi!Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:24:00 AM
You would have been welcome to my Tuna Debbie. I like sushi as well but only if it is cooked.
Date: 10/27/2014 6:52:00 AM
A fabulous time had by all...can't wait for the video of the dancing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:18:00 AM
Fortunate for you they didn't take any videos.
Date: 10/27/2014 12:20:00 AM
You included everyone in this. A family get together full of memories. Happy you had a great time but you could have passed that raw Tuna to me! Sushi is one of my favorite foods ever! :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:19:00 AM
I only tried a small piece so as not to waste it. Everyone else loved it.
Date: 10/26/2014 11:15:00 PM
I'm glad you had a swell time, Richard. :) I saw it all in my mind's eye. I blocked out the bit about all the sea food, though. ;) Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:20:00 AM
We had a lot of fun. Hugs back.
Date: 10/26/2014 9:49:00 PM
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful slice of this birthday celebration with us tonight, enjoyed it very much, cheri
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:23:00 AM
Mine as well Eve, thanks for the visit.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:21:00 AM
It is my pleasure Cherl.
Date: 10/26/2014 9:15:00 PM
It seemed like I was sitting there enjoying the feast Holiday feast are my favorites :) Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:29:00 AM
Mine as well Eve, thanks for the visit.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:25:00 AM
Date: 10/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
Richard, I loved your line about God being worth a fuss! And I totally agree about cooking everything from the sea. I also had a bad experience with an expensive piece of tuna, apparently all great chefs cannot bear to cook the stuff they just singe it leaving it rubbery and slick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Dan it seems we are of like mind.
Date: 10/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
sounds like an awesome party Richard - great vivid description:-) hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:30:00 AM
It was, hugs back to you.
Date: 10/26/2014 6:14:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful day with friends. I thought this was going to end like my poem My worse Date and was waiting for something horrible to happened. I'm glad to see it was just an enjoyable party.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2014 6:17:00 PM
I will have to check out your poem Brenda. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 10/26/2014 6:08:00 PM
There is nothing more beautiful than great food ,and mostly good company.An entertaining poem indeed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, in this case both the food and the company shone brightly.

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