Krakatoa Kritic007 Poet Rhyme

Channeled Perspectives

I'm channeled rhymes, perspectives of young poet late in life!
Evolving too, I hope to please, share reveries a wife
(Scheherazade) shows to her spouse (loved patrons, here confessed),
who fears both too, for wives do fail, find heads divorce their chest.

Attention found here couched in verse, two stanzas, four lines each,
all meant to praise, if questions raised, still purposed not to preach.
I hope to show some verse you share - reception won: song heard!
My warbled tweets tout gold I get

(signed)
brown, ear-catching bird.


Krakatoa Kritic #007
12/06/20

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Franci Hoffman March 2, 2021 at 1:24 PM Perspectives well expressed. Delightful poem, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2020 at 4:09 AM I would share my poems with you any time. Your perspective in this poem is right on the dot. ~~

Sand Blown December 6, 2020 at 3:30 PM .....your wrt was wrote right-on.....we manifest abstracts as points of reference and call it time.....so we know time only as some effect.....the effects we manifest are/is not the river of 'time'... its all just momentary imaginary flotsam all science wants to see through........stan sand Krakatoa Kritic007 December 6, 2020 at 5:05 PM That sounds like it could be a little overblown to me, Mrl. Sand man! Ha!