Changing Scenery

~ Amidst the changing scenery as faces come and go Names reflect the differences of those we’ve come to know Along a winding avenue where store fronts sell their wares Traffic lights of red and green change too among the stares Where sunshine breaks the foggy mist and clear as any bell A ringing forms about my ears, a song I know so well I look around and hope I see this beauty I desire A butterfly upon the wind keeps soaring ever higher And as I reach to grab a hold those wings of pastel gleam She flutters just beyond my reach as if some kind of dream I hang my head in misery, another wasted day The love that I was longing for has somehow got away Clouds now build in grey design my smile has run aground Happiness is not on sale not anywhere I’ve found While narrow sidewalks lead the way quite keen to every crack My focus finds a forward view I just cannot look back When there upon the front door steps these tear filled eyes they spy Waiting near the welcome mat my precious butterfly And suddenly the bluest skies appear high up above For in this changing scenery I’ve found my one true love
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Date: 9/21/2019 8:19:00 PM
wow thought I had commented on this! But must be my age....I forgot to comment? Doesn't sound like me huh? Beautifully enchanting Chris!;) modi gotta lay my old ass down!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 8:58:00 AM
Ha, no it doesn't sound like you at all. : ) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 9/11/2019 11:13:00 AM
such a poignant poem my friend, i always look at the butterflies as a sign from a loved on long gone, but not forgotten...you bring this one to life so beautifully, trace it with tones of sadness, and end it happily...amazing write :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your comment has made me smile this morning. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 9/11/2019 10:35:00 AM
See what I mean, Chris? If you like to just read sometimes, this one is beautiful and satisfying.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your kindness always.
Date: 9/11/2019 9:24:00 AM
This is amazing. Such detail and beautiful analogy with the butterfly I felt this walk as if I took it. Well done, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 9/11/2019 8:25:00 AM
Wow! Chris, You have done it again, you've written a piece that drew your reader immediately. Your subject matters are always top notch. The picture you created with words has that "wow" factor. And who doesn't love butterflies? I loved your ending. Have wonderful day my friend;-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I always smile when you stop by
Date: 9/10/2019 7:29:00 PM
Beautiful ~ with a perfect ending! I like that this was not rushed whatsoever, and that you managed, once again, to tell an entire story in such a small span. It felt complete, and that's a great thing :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 6:57:00 AM
Thank you my friend I am always happy when you stop by. You kind words are truly appreciated. I do try to create endings to my poem that make sense. Sometimes I am successful and sometimes I am not. Glad this one worked that way as you read it today.
Date: 9/10/2019 6:10:00 PM
Chris, I FAVED this immediately, even before I started this comment. I've never done that before. The magic of the butterfly drew me in---and I cried with happiness when it/your love returned. This is toooooooo byooooootiful, my friend. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/11/2019 6:55:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled this one floated so nicely to you. I appreciate your kindness and support Gershon.
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