Changing of Seasons

everything and everyone seems to be in motion 
everyone but me 

seasons change, days turn into months,people age
but I stand still, unaffected

the only time I feel alive, the only time I thrive is when most would rather
be still 

when the cold creeps in I come alive!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Awesome write. SKAT
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Mighty pen mwaba! the only time I feel alive, the only time I thrive is when most would rather be still when the cold creeps in I come alive!- Many can relate to the cold weather something about it that makes us feel like well, we can feel the chill in our bones. lol.. The last line is the most powerful of all the lines dear friend. I love it ! A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas to you and yours! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Kalonge Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 10:28 AM
thanks for reading and commenting. merry Christmas to you too!!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:17 PM
Good write, a dark poem, Mwaba. Blessings and Merry Christmas
Kalonge Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:18 PM
thanks, same to u
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