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Changing Moods

Even young people like Fred went from sad to mad, thinking that happiness was a wish not grated; he succumbed to sickness, he wished he were dead. Changing moods in him persisted and created a split personality; he showed thoughts of insensibility, a pitiful man unloved and afraid. His mother stood by him and cried, friends and family kept their distance; once he was so loved and admired, his grey eyes exuded confidence. Resigned to his fate, he became a wreck it got worse until he went completely beserk; smashing everything he found in his way, he impersonated an actor in his wild play. He found pleasure in destroying a memory too bitter for him to endure with gentleness; when his fury was appeased by madness, he calmed down and laughed deliriously. At only eighteen, his destiny is sealed forever; in a wheelchair he spends his days in distress, not even his mom can comfort him with hugs... he looks at her sadly, then bursts into laughter.

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Date: 5/23/2016 8:36:00 PM
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Rainbow Promise
Date: 5/23/2016 8:41:00 PM
Sorry Sient, Comment below appeared twice. When I erased, the small one remained. BU t how did it get here it is now splitting? (smile.
Date: 5/23/2016 8:26:00 PM
Date: 5/23/2016 7:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry This I say, is close to the medical, psychiatric, psychotherapeutic split. "Something" caused the mind to CROSS OVER! This developed into inappropriate behavior which the individual does not understand, perhaps does not even know why he is no longer the loved, trusted one. Compensated by crying spells and laughter - berserk to others. No cure? The mind displays anger for the unknown, is confused, scattered, suicidal. Worst than schizo? A 7 for coming so close to scientific split. Some say: lol.
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Date: 5/23/2016 2:26:00 AM
Pure craziness especially the sinisterness at the end! Congrats on your placement in my contest!
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 5/23/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Brian for my placement in your contest. I am very thrilled for my win. Your comment has boosted my confidence tremendously, there's no greater joy than being honored with a winning entry. Take care and have a terrific day. Best Wishes, Andrew.

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