Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

"changing Minds"

If we can close our eyes and switch our minds...
I'd see your ways and your dreams inside...

You could see my world through my mirrored sight...
And know how I feel and come in my light...

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 25, 2010 at 6:58 PM And u could use either of these couplets to enter Constance's Crystalline mini blog contest.. awesome words my friend... lovely sentiments..

Vicki Acquah September 25, 2010 at 5:21 AM This I LOVE s s.t. t .p good write! when I say that next u will know it means Short Sweet & To the POINT. very nice really!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2010 at 7:50 PM This is very nice, Michael. Keep those little poems coming! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2010 at 2:41 PM You've got this one right...Enjoyed reading your insight..Sara

Doris Culverhouse September 24, 2010 at 1:03 PM well written poem on human relationships. great thouhts.

Wilma Neels September 24, 2010 at 11:10 AM If only Michael, I wishfulness of your write.. Had a nice relazing day.. thank goodness for PH :) love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 24, 2010 at 10:21 AM That sure would be nice, to just be able to switch minds, would definitely solve the problem of misunderstandings and avoid confusion! Really like that thought! --thank you so much for dropping by my poems :) --nikko :)

Jo Bien September 24, 2010 at 9:36 AM Michael.. I borrowed some of your first line in Pandora's box...I hope you don't mind :-)

September 24, 2010 at 8:59 AM Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading. Love Scarlett

Jo Bien September 24, 2010 at 8:00 AM this is beautiful Michael! J.B.