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Changing Me

I see me now-who I want to be A girl so strong-a heart so free A spirit ready to fight without rest Yet a girl with mercy entwined in her breath I can see the girl I want to be But she isn’t the one looking back at me When I’m gazing in the mirror Her heart is crippled by her fears- Her eyes are clouded with the scars of years Her spirit is confused with whom to fight And mercy is slipping out of sight I am not the girl I want to be Not even sure if I ever could be But every day I wake renewed once again And try to make myself into my dream again And with the help of my Master and Friend I will sleep a little more like my dream and less like I am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2009 5:44:00 PM
this is so deep im drowning
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:34:00 PM
"I can see the girl I want to be / But she isn't the one looking back at me." Deep words. I like your writing. This is the same struggle I face with my mirror, too.
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