Joseph May Poet Rictameter

Changing Landscape

 Seasons
 Snowy winter 
 with its icy fingers
 Soon thaws out to bring spring blossoms,
 Lilacs and roses with their fragrant scent 
 will then bask in summer sunshine.
 Then autumn takes the throne
 Leaves start to fall
 Seasons

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Sara Kendrick August 27, 2024 at 8:04 AM Good one. I think I have written some with this meter or form. LOL..Can't remember for sure. I like this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. It is nice to find my poem on the list. Sara K

Brandy Nicole August 18, 2024 at 6:55 PM I like when ' lilacs and roses with their fragrant scent, ' bask in summer sunshine. ' You've placed every season within, so beautifully. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2024 at 3:56 PM Very nicely done. Was this for a contest?

Hilda Greenhough July 24, 2024 at 11:34 PM Flowing, changing and happy, your poem gives comfort. Thanks for writing a lovely Rictameter.

Heidi Sands July 24, 2024 at 1:48 PM Great one Joseph! Well done :)

Mrs. Yolanda Joy Nicholsen July 24, 2024 at 11:58 AM Lovely write I enjoyed reading your work here many blessings

Sam Kauffman July 24, 2024 at 11:26 AM Joseph, this is so picturesque. Each line transported me into a new season and the transition from season to season. Love the rictameter format that ebbs and flows like the seasons themselves. If this is or a contest, best wishes. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith July 22, 2024 at 2:49 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Changing Landscape" write. The year goes round/round with the seasons.... Have a fun day............

Victor Buhagiar July 21, 2024 at 9:44 AM I love Autumn. It's still far away though. Great poem.

Ink Empress July 21, 2024 at 8:10 AM I love how youv written this rictameter. Been a while since iv last written one. How you’ve written “snowy winter with its icy winter” is so good! Creative! And so very fragrant with lilacs and roses! Beautiful one. Pleasure reading this dear joseph.