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Changing Landscape

Seasons Snowy winter with its icy fingers Soon thaws out to bring spring blossoms, Lilacs and roses with their fragrant scent will then bask in summer sunshine. Then autumn takes the throne Leaves start to fall Seasons

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2024 8:04:00 AM

Good one. I think I have written some with this meter or form. LOL..Can't remember for sure. I like this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. It is nice to find my poem on the list. Sara K

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/18/2024 6:55:00 PM

I like when ' lilacs and roses with their fragrant scent, ' bask in summer sunshine. ' You've placed every season within, so beautifully. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2024 3:56:00 PM

Very nicely done. Was this for a contest?

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/24/2024 11:34:00 PM

Flowing, changing and happy, your poem gives comfort. Thanks for writing a lovely Rictameter.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/24/2024 1:48:00 PM

Great one Joseph! Well done :)

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 7/24/2024 11:58:00 AM

Lovely write I enjoyed reading your work here many blessings

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/24/2024 11:26:00 AM

Joseph, this is so picturesque. Each line transported me into a new season and the transition from season to season. Love the rictameter format that ebbs and flows like the seasons themselves. If this is or a contest, best wishes. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/22/2024 2:49:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Changing Landscape" write. The year goes round/round with the seasons.... Have a fun day............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 9:44:00 AM

I love Autumn. It's still far away though. Great poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/21/2024 8:10:00 AM

I love how youv written this rictameter. Been a while since iv last written one. How you’ve written “snowy winter with its icy winter” is so good! Creative! And so very fragrant with lilacs and roses! Beautiful one. Pleasure reading this dear joseph.