Notes About The Poem

Changing Direction

A loser til you’re not.
Not a loser, a hotshot.

Keep on climbing
past wings and whatnot.

Looking down at your past;
can’t bypass your sins.

However, newfallen snow
will cover them; do not

cover them up; reminders
of the valley you dug

all by yourself; together
there is a you’ll-make-it.

Joy lets you taste manna
falling onto your tongue

and the juice of the grape
without distillation -

body and blood;
you’re a newborn babe.

When the trumpet sounds
you will not fall.

You’ll see the risen son
and thank God, and thank God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:33 PM
we need that kind of poems, for seeing beyond high mountains, thanks poet Kim enjoyed a lot
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 5:31 PM
I appreciate the flow and spiritual nature of this poem...well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:47 AM
Hi Kim, your poem is brilliant. Great metaphors and imagery.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Thank you so much, Victor!
Greenhough Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 9:14 PM
I like this, it's beautiful and spiritual.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Amen, sister. Warts and all, God will take us back. Great message. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Oh how God loves us!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Amen to those words resounding and instilled with grace.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Thank you, dear William!
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