Shanity Rain Poet Free verse

Changing By Learning

Changing my writings the first words written
 innocence  initially intended   
changing the format,  the colors 
leaving emotions openly displayed 
Changing the long to short ,  revising all thoughts
for it is left for the readers perception
always in changes one opens a door
through changing I will learn through a lesson
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Skat A October 23, 2013 at 1:05 PM Hi Shanity :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT~ Shanity Rain October 24, 2013 at 8:28 AM Thank-you my beautiful, well spoken friend !

Debbie Guzzi October 22, 2013 at 10:46 AM Congrad's on your win free verse is a favorite form of mine. Light & Love Shanity Rain October 22, 2013 at 10:58 AM Thank-you Debbie , I love all the unique forms I have found here on this site , I am not sure you know, but you all have become Teachers ~ I have always loved to write.

Karen Anglesey October 21, 2013 at 2:47 PM Swirling around in thought and indecision, always hoping to leave our best impression. A very thoughtful write and congrats on your win :) Shanity Rain October 22, 2013 at 12:19 AM Thank-you my beautiful friend , inside your spirit and outside , Shanity ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta October 20, 2013 at 10:25 PM Congrats on the win in the contest, Shanity Shanity Rain October 21, 2013 at 12:07 PM Thank-you My Doctor of so many words ! You are so faithful in honoring everyone here , I notice you have such a beautiful soul. You take the time to honor all , in contest ..this tells me so much about you truly being a Poet and Doctor !

Poet Destroyer A October 20, 2013 at 9:14 PM Shanity,, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3 Shanity Rain October 21, 2013 at 12:03 PM Thank-you my artist and poetess , when I think of all you have inspired me too write , you have become a Teacher in my eyes , to win , is a honor !