Changing

Child Young, Innocent Laughing, Playing, Smiling Preschool, Middle School, High School, College Working, Working, Working Serious, Tired Adult

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 5:49:00 PM

VERY good, showing the big contrasts in the two. That was funny working working working . I am glad I would not write it that way for myself: I'd say: playing, working, playing!! Congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2012 3:17:00 PM

Enjoyed reading..I totally understand for I have been there and done that ..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2012 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win Selena. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2012 8:47:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is a descriptive set of words for one's usual lifetime.

Shaney Rose

Date: 1/22/2012 4:49:00 PM

Sad..but wonderful.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/22/2012 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Selena, Elizabeth

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/22/2012 8:13:00 AM

A lifetime in six lines. Well done Selena. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2012 7:48:00 AM

congrats Selena on HM for this unique entry luv..

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/19/2012 8:06:00 PM

Unique...but sums it up well. Enjoyed !!