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Poet I do not know?

Changing

Child

Young, Innocent

Laughing, Playing, Smiling

Preschool, Middle School, High School, College

Working, Working, Working

Serious, Tired

Adult

Copyright © Selena R | Year Posted 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2012 at 5:49 PM

VERY good, showing the big contrasts in the two. That was funny working working working . I am glad I would not write it that way for myself: I'd say: playing, working, playing!! Congrats on your win.

January 23, 2012 at 3:17 PM

Enjoyed reading..I totally understand for I have been there and done that ..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2012 at 12:03 PM

Congratulations on your super win Selena. Love, Carol

January 22, 2012 at 8:47 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is a descriptive set of words for one's usual lifetime.

January 22, 2012 at 4:49 PM

Sad..but wonderful.

Lizanne Scholtz

January 22, 2012 at 10:16 AM

Congratulations on your win Selena, Elizabeth

January 22, 2012 at 8:13 AM

A lifetime in six lines. Well done Selena. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 22, 2012 at 7:48 AM

congrats Selena on HM for this unique entry luv..

January 19, 2012 at 8:06 PM

Unique...but sums it up well. Enjoyed !!

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