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The snows so white and glistened in the light. It is undisturbed like the dead of night. Her love is so pure, so sweet and kind. There's nothing in the world that could change her mind. The smell of the rain, as it cleans the world. It feeds the trees, that help us breathe. Her love is like rain, it cleans his past. It feeds the good, no one thought he had. The sun shines bright, and guides the way. It radiates heat in the coldest days. Her love's so strong it's overwhelming. But it gave him courage, to change his ways.

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Date: 2/28/2015 9:05:00 PM
Sara, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:42:00 PM
Hi Sara, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/26/2015 3:11:00 PM
Very nice write, Sara. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2/26/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thank you. I am a little rusty. LOL. Have a good day and thank you for reading!
Date: 2/26/2015 1:47:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sara - A very well written poem! - Nice that you chose to share it here with us - Looking forward to reading more from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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