Changes

Changes 
I feel the wind against my face, 
It feels like your loving embrace, 
I feel the sun warm right threw, 
The same as when I'm with you, 
I feel the rain fall down my face, 
The way i feel when there's no embrace, 
I hear the storm rumble right threw, 
the same as when i argue with you, 
I see the snow all white aglow, 
All lonely the same as if you go, 
So let the sun shine and make us glow, 
because we love each other so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 2, 2010 at 3:47 AM
I would like to thank you all for your kind words when i work out how to work the website i will read your work thanks once again
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February 1, 2010 at 8:20 PM
The rhyme scheme is magical, nice write. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me. Love and Peace
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February 1, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Teresa, you're talented. All your poems are moving and flow very nicely. Keep it up. David
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February 1, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Welcome to soup. Wishing you many more postings of such great work. Sara
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