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Changes I feel the wind against my face, It feels like your loving embrace, I feel the sun warm right threw, The same as when I'm with you, I feel the rain fall down my face, The way i feel when there's no embrace, I hear the storm rumble right threw, the same as when i argue with you, I see the snow all white aglow, All lonely the same as if you go, So let the sun shine and make us glow, because we love each other so.

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Date: 2/2/2010 3:47:00 AM
I would like to thank you all for your kind words when i work out how to work the website i will read your work thanks once again
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:20:00 PM
The rhyme scheme is magical, nice write. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me. Love and Peace
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:21:00 AM
Teresa, you're talented. All your poems are moving and flow very nicely. Keep it up. David
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:16:00 AM
Welcome to soup. Wishing you many more postings of such great work. Sara
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