Kim Rodrigues Poet Alliteration

Changeling Clouds

CHANGELING CLOUDS

Changeling cheered her doubts
Afeared mother of many clouds
Secretly placed by a wand’s haste
A godmother who’d offered to help

~ Coin of flipped fate - dark cloud cataclysm ~

6/3/2017

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Olumuyiwa Onaf June 15, 2017 at 7:12 AM Wow! Beautiful! Kim Rodrigues June 15, 2017 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Olumuyiwa

Moon Flower June 7, 2017 at 12:57 AM Dropping by and extending a congrats line. ;) Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2017 at 6:11 AM Thank you so much, Moon Flower!

Paul Callus June 5, 2017 at 1:53 AM I like how you used 'changeling' in this context, Kim. A lovely creative winning poem....congratulations! Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2017 at 5:56 AM Thanks so much, Paul!

Sushma A. Singh June 4, 2017 at 10:47 PM Congrats on your fine win, Kim! Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 10:51 PM Thank you, Sushma!

David Mohn June 4, 2017 at 9:06 PM Big congratulations Kim :) Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 9:09 PM Thank you, David!

Brenda Mcgrath June 4, 2017 at 8:56 PM Congratulations on your win Kim. Good write! Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 9:09 PM Thanks, Brenda!

Joseph May June 4, 2017 at 7:06 PM Congrats on your win Kim Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 7:32 PM Thank you, Joseph!