Changeless

why do i choose to forget
there is a place and time
when this identity doesn't matter to me

a place of no boundaries and no separation
where instead of me and everyone else outside of me
there is all of us as one with our creator

a time of no past and no future
when i have a distinct and very real feeling
that i am completely taken care of
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 5:29 AM
Thanks for your blog comment, I have more questions ;). As to the above question; you chose to forget because you have an "ego" through prayer or meditation you can "suspend the ego" and for brief periods be with the "All" it's not an easy thing to do BUT it can be done with effort and desire. Light & Love
Joseph Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 7:22 AM
withing god's grace - so the physical place doesn't matter
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Great expressiveness. It is good to feel that one is completely taken care of in every way.Sara
Mason Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Amen ... smile ... another wonderful write Yoni
Freeman Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful, state of being, yes it can become a place to dwell, jm
Chircop Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 3:44 AM
i find myself day dreaming like Ruben below too,yes we dream,we share the same dream--a dream of being cared for,a dream where edentity doesnt make a difference,a place witohut boundaries,all of us as one with our God,you re a great philosopherYoni,lets live the time of no past and no future,lets liv ethe moment in changeless time--great writer im just gonna add you to my favs-charma
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