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There once was a man. 
A man who loved me. 
He left for a time. 
When he returned. 
He was not the same. 
I had feared this would happen. 
He said not  to worry. 
I tried not to worry. 
I ended up being right about worrying. 
He said he went for us. 
To save us. 
We were fine in my mind. 
I guess in his mind we were messed up. 
I tried being perfect when he returned. 
I couldn't help but show my disappointment. 
In the end we left each other. 
We never talked again. 
I haven't heard from him since. 
Yesterday I was walking the streets and saw him. 
He had a beautiful wife and a daughter. 
She called for her. 
Piper was her name. 
That was our dream. 
They had rings. 
They look so happy something I haven't been since we split. 
He saw me standing there with tears running down my face. 
He looked happy and sad about seeing me. 
In the end I just left and went to a better place. 
Somewhere I could look over him. 
I was finally happy up there. 
The moral to this poem is don't go or change if she pleads you not too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/21/2011 9:04:00 PM
Yeah you've got a point and what's soup mail?
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Date: 8/21/2011 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your poem with us... a tale one can learn from... I am sending you soup mail...p.d.
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:37:00 AM
Thank you for reading these. I find these just child's play. These aren't even good, but that's up to you guys.
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Benita. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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