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Changed

There was this sky Sky which had all the highs This high has lost its shine Shine that had many pretty lives Lives that now dont fly. There is this land Land with many cracks Cracks with living beings in them Beings that arent sweet. The world changed So did you and me.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/2/2024 11:55:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Ultimate Spectator

Date: 10/5/2021 8:18:00 AM

Can't agree more, my world changed without any notice and absolutely beings aren't sweet this time.