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Change Those Dirty Diapers

an adult whose mind has been soiled by the filth he daily ingests has no parent to change him no cute child - he disgusts us April 19, 2018 For John Lawless' Contest 'CHANGING THE MIND'S DIAPER'

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2018 5:14:00 PM

Many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/5/2018 3:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your win with this cute poem. " he disgusts us" .. truly.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2018 9:00:00 PM

Back with congrats, Andrea. Well done.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/4/2018 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this short simple poem that speaks volumes loud and clear. Well done. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/4/2018 10:41:00 AM

A great one, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 5/4/2018 7:28:00 AM

...as the T-shirt says..."Politicians, like diapers, should be changed frequently....and for the same reason". Thanks for participating in the contest Andrea..

Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2018 7:50:00 AM

This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/24/2018 12:24:00 PM

Yours is a superb take on this contest theme, Andrea. The title tricked me into thinking it was going to be humorous, but the serious content is also appreciated. Regards // paul

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 4/24/2018 3:40:00 AM

I like the title. It makes remember Moses of the old testament when God told him, "remove those sandals.."

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/23/2018 5:44:00 PM

This has veracity! Small children are cute...an adult child perverse. Nicely said! Top notch!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/22/2018 9:36:00 PM

An awesome write for the contest Andrea; so true about the mind which can become soiled and needs a changing! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/22/2018 2:32:00 PM

Well done, Andrea. Yep that wraps it up. There are disgusting people out there who would do well to change the dirty diaper they walk around in while arrogantly and noxiously polluting everyone's environment.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/22/2018 1:18:00 PM

Strong, realistic statement, Andrea! Well-done. Janice

John Gondolf

Date: 4/21/2018 10:55:00 AM

It is sometimes a difficult challenge to avoid the filth that surrounds us; I think whether it affects our mind depends on how we were brought up. I do worry about the next generation. Nicely written, Andrea, best of luck. John

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/20/2018 9:13:00 PM

Pretty harsh sounding words! Wish you would explain this ode to me! I just put out a new chapbook "Of Other Things". Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2018 6:58:00 AM

I agree with the sentiments..well captured in your words..best for a win, Andrea.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/20/2018 4:38:00 AM

Difficult for many indeed...I change my diapers as often as possible...fresh and clean...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2018 2:28:00 AM

How true Andrea, there does not seem to be any constraints anymore, filth everywhere, and comedy full of bad language that's supposed to be funny , I dont think so . Good luck. Tom.