Change the World

The type of messengering we need now.

I enjoyed reading this one that is featured on homepage. Thanks for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured. Way to go. Sara K

you're so right, even now our world is chaotic, filled with hatred, intolerance and negativity. Your words spoke to me!

Or no book! Amen sister, I love this powerful emphatic poem.

Life is not easy in our modern world but if you can reach one person and help them become a better person that could be a great asset to you and to them. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K

Teach them love.A good message.

I believe things can be eye- openers. True poetry is able to touch the heart and move the soul. This is a very passionate write. And I deeply enjoyed it thank you.

Agreed yet its what you find inside you like you said that is your soul xx

A very nice poem that in a simple, but also in a very succesfull way shows the way, to build a human, happy and better world!!!...

A deep first post Jessica. Nice word choices invoke a strong emotional response.

Well stated reaching rhyme, Welcome to Poetry soup. Peace, Love and Joy.

Strong moral values. wow

In every poem of yours I see the deep empathy you have for the world. How difficult it is to change the world and the psyche of mankind?! Can our poems do that?! I hope , I wish and pray aloud the God

Well said!

I will never say a tragedy like a shooting has any posative side whatsoever. What i noticed in times like these though is that when sorrows and misery come, human hope, love and peace come to meet them as displayed by the thoughts in your well weitten poem. Excellent and welcome to the soup!

I like this. Very real and pure. ;) Welcome to Poetry Soup Jessica.

Jessica Z, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Hope you win the contest, Jessica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**