Change of Venue

on
this
lovely day
birds singing
more than usual
the sky crystal clear
‘twas a most glorious day
one we’d never forget to be thankful
for the bountiful gifts of life

just mailed all the invites
celebrating this august
married 50 years

rushing home to show off
the new dress she bought
when out the patio door
she thinks she sees
his collapsed body
in the backyard
leaps to the rescue
only to find him
cold and stiff
tears of grief
so explode
that her heart
cannot contain

their bodies were
found crisscrossed
amidst their
prized rose beds
as hand in hand
they marched
through the arches
of heaven’s gate



AP: 3rd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Woah, my heart skipped a beat. Effective ink. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Maureen. It sounds made up but it's not!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 2:45 AM
A surprise ending, and yet how wonderful; to march through heaven's gate together. Nicely built, and I love the MARCHED. For that is exactly how I see them too.
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:41 AM
This is based on a true story... Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
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