Change of Seasons

Shimmering full moon
Will rise before the frost comes.
Rays find what was lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 6:03 PM
This one is beauty. Lainie
Meade Stephenson Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:35 AM
A beautiful scene this paints in my mind. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments. Have a blessed day~Mary
Knop Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 4:17 AM
Great picture, Marty! Yes frost comes here, too after sunset. But it is not too bad yet. My new place here seems to be quite sheltered. Have a great year ahead and thank you for your comments...Gert
Haick Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 2:47 PM
A pretty picture you've painted here, Marty! Peace, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Excellent Haiku Marty. Sincererly, Moses
Strand Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Indeed Marty Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Excellent Haiku. Keep the descriptive and creative pen flowing. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 11:13 PM
Nice one, Marty. How are things there in NC? Cold or warm?
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