Debbie Duncan Poet Couplet

Change of Season

It's the changing of the season
You should have told me.

I've worn out all my welcomes.
So I don't love you anymore.

I won't be knocking on your door.
Yes, you say you won't forget me.

I see it's the rainbow moon out tonight.
Though the summer days drifted off-site.

You might forget me towards morning light.
For I shall have already forgotten you.

I've watched you many times come and go.
Through the shadows of the crystal moon.

I trace the memory of your face in my dreams.
I stare at the picture of you on the nightstand.

Feel the coldness of you come over me.
As the mystical lover's moon shines outside my window.


10/07/ 2013  12midnight

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John Fleming February 23, 2015 at 1:47 AM An awesome piece of prose! Beautifully expressed!! :) john.

Lucilla Carrillo March 2, 2014 at 12:40 PM A very nice poem. Sometimes things are just not meant to be. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Don Johnson October 28, 2013 at 11:53 PM we seem to spend some time together, alas one of two must leave, we grow apart ...seperate, surrender, another's time to grieve, the mood is sometimes blue, when looking back remember, good times we received that warm december..... too. Don re Debbie Duncan "Change of Season"

Robert Pettit October 26, 2013 at 10:50 PM They said there was going to be a lunar eclipse during the last full moon. Somehow, I did not see it. Your nice write reminded me of that night not too long ago. Debbie Duncan October 27, 2013 at 2:02 AM Thank you for reading Robert, I never seen any eclipse either , was disappointed myself ;}

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2013 at 8:32 AM You asked about old cold men of the woods. Yes, it must have won. I saw congratulations there but not sure if it did very well!! Let me see if I can find any poems of yours I have not read. Debbie Duncan October 22, 2013 at 6:17 PM I know my Fairy Tales poem won 5th place ;}

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 22, 2013 at 12:40 AM Mystical way of showin u luv him n luv him not, like sayin i damn care, but stil cant forget as if nothin hapend. Very nice fine poem, pal Debbie Duncan October 22, 2013 at 2:35 AM Thank you ;}

Cherl Dunn October 21, 2013 at 7:00 PM This has the romance of great 60's love song, loved it alot. I'm glad you enjoyed my Beatles peom it's written with alot of feeling. Debbie Duncan October 22, 2013 at 2:35 AM Thank you for reading cherl ;}

Lucilla Carrillo October 18, 2013 at 11:29 PM Hi Debbie; I love this. it's a great poem. Sometimes we change with the Seasons. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Debbie Duncan October 19, 2013 at 12:03 AM Thank you Lucilla ;}

Nette Onclaud October 18, 2013 at 11:58 AM dreamy , dreamy... the moonlight brings magic to your sweet pining,deb... a rich pile of work!..:) huggs Debbie Duncan October 18, 2013 at 12:29 PM Thank you nette ;}

Donna Jones October 18, 2013 at 7:13 AM Captures you from the first line thru to the last word....beautiful....loved it Debbie Debbie Duncan October 22, 2013 at 2:36 AM Thank you Donna ;}

Kelly Deschler October 17, 2013 at 4:28 PM I loved this poem, Debbie! I like the simplicity of it, mixed with deep emotions. I felt like I was reading a poem of my own! There is such beauty in sadness, sometimes. We may be alone in this world, but the moon is always there for us! Fantastic poetry! Adding it to my favs!...Thank you so much for the great comments! Debbie Duncan October 18, 2013 at 12:09 AM Thank you Kelly ;}

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2013 at 5:36 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work this morning..There is a melancoly that floats on the moonlight..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Debbie Duncan October 17, 2013 at 3:59 PM Thank you Sara ;}

Joseph May October 16, 2013 at 10:09 PM reflections 'neath the moonlight.....nicely penned Debbie....thanks for stopping by... Debbie Duncan October 17, 2013 at 2:58 AM Thank you for coming to read my words ;}

Karen Anglesey October 13, 2013 at 4:05 PM I really like how you created such great imagery in the lines. The mystical lovers moon, picture on the nightstand, coldness of you come over me,,, great contrasts Debbie Duncan October 13, 2013 at 5:46 PM Thank you Karen ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2013 at 1:36 PM - The love shines through your window ........ a beautiful and romantic poem Debbie. love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan October 14, 2013 at 3:23 AM Thank you Anne Lise ;}

David Williams October 13, 2013 at 10:22 AM Debbie, this is full of wonderful images, i love the idea of a rainbow moon, very well crafted....David Debbie Duncan October 13, 2013 at 12:44 PM Thank you David ;}

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2013 at 8:07 AM I like the way you had the cold moon shining outside the window at the end of this. Very nice one for my Sunday morning. Debbie Duncan October 13, 2013 at 12:43 PM Thank you Andrea ;}

Duke Beaufort October 12, 2013 at 5:08 AM Debbie, your poetry is fun on several levels. A lot of poets have written about the passages of life, but you do it with such passion. You have a lot of feeling and make me feel that there is hope for the human race before we reach the finish line. For that, I thank you kindly. Debbie Duncan October 12, 2013 at 3:59 PM Thank you Duke ;}

Dr.Ram Mehta October 10, 2013 at 12:58 AM Very nice romantic expressions creating apt surrounding Debbie Debbie Duncan October 10, 2013 at 2:41 AM Thank you for reading ;}