Change of Pace

As I leave work this Friday night,
my mind is still in over-drive.
Momentum from my busy day
keeps spinning mixed ideas and plans.
But just now I face a heavy task
involving choices to be made:
my mother moves tomorrow morning
to smaller quarters nearer me.
That means choices must be made
about possessions dear to her but
will not fit in her smaller place.
We must sort out, pare down and cull.

We go to work with pad and pencil:
this coat has not been worn in years,
this table won’t begin to fit ...
The kids might want this china set.
I speed along to make the list
but suddenly I am aware
my mother moves at a slower pace
and I have left her far behind.
She wants to talk about the friend
who gave to her this faded scarf,
about the family meals she served
here on this old oaken tabletop.

While I am urging her to choose,
she tells me the stories of her life.
She wants to have a slower farewell
to all these pieces of her life.
At last, I come to realize
I must shift down to a lower gear
to give her time to say good-bye
to these fragments of her yesteryears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Ted B, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Ted, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Attaway Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Ted, I see myself as "mother" and you as "my son." Thank you for this insight.....I'll try to say my good-byes before "Friday" comes. Truly, thanks!! A beautiful poem..and nicely written. Barbara
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April 4, 2009 at 8:19 AM
You made my cry with this one. The image you painted is very clear. My grandmother loved her things, too..in the same way. As memories. God bless you and her.
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April 3, 2009 at 2:16 PM
How compassionate of you to listen to your mother's stories about the items that reflect on relationships in her life, Ted. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You bring us a new, gifted voice! Love, Carolyn
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