Change of Light

the sun disappears
        beneath traveling gray clouds
               a candle burns bright


Heidi Sands

11/20/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kaufman Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 7:52 AM
this petite poem has such strong imagery,Great job.
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 8:01 AM
Thank you very much Nancy :)
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Sun sets--candle delights. I see the sequence!
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 9:13 AM
I am happy you see it. Thank you Vijay. Your comments are appreciated :)
Wolf Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Perfectly imaged, Heidi. Peace on Earth, Gershon
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Thank you Gershon :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 2:08 PM
The flickering light of the candle is soothing once the sun goes down. Tom
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Yes it certainly is. Thank you Tom. I always appreciate your comments. :)
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