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Change of Light

the sun disappears beneath traveling gray clouds a candle burns bright Heidi Sands 11/20/22

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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 11/27/2022 7:52:00 AM
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this petite poem has such strong imagery,Great job.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2022 8:01:00 AM
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Thank you very much Nancy :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/21/2022 5:50:00 AM
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Sun sets--candle delights. I see the sequence!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2022 9:13:00 AM
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I am happy you see it. Thank you Vijay. Your comments are appreciated :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2022 8:00:00 PM
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Perfectly imaged, Heidi. Peace on Earth, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2022 4:14:00 AM
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Thank you Gershon :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/20/2022 2:08:00 PM
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The flickering light of the candle is soothing once the sun goes down. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2022 2:30:00 PM
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Yes it certainly is. Thank you Tom. I always appreciate your comments. :)

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