Change Needed
.
Long dry spell so hot
Unpaved road sends billows sheets
Dust in house__ blessed rain
(Remembering when a child, one summer it was more than a month without rain....Then rain
came in huge droplets...Dust would float up from the raindrops that hit the ground...When we
finally got rain, it was like one of the greatest blessings from God.)
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