Change In Weather

A blanket of grey
is pulled over
the blue expanse
of a late September sky
shutting out a protesting sun..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 5:32 AM
I'm ok with that. Love autumn's gray, dry windy days. This makes me envision so much more (like leaves twirling all around). Lovely personification, and I am sorry sun! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 5:51 PM
Oh that rascal ol' sun! Cute poem! ~Carrie
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