Susan Gentry Poet Rhyme

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Change

Tentative evaluation of personal standards
Enlightens and reveals possible answers
Specific visual outline reduces
Transference of explanations and excuses

Discover behavioral actions to minimize 
problem areas that need to be scrutinized
Knowledge of character defects analyzed
enables change as awareness is centralized

Past experiences can be used to exercise
self evaluations for patterns to improvise
Trial and error results that are summarized  
determine changes that can be optimized 

Chronic, complicated consequences require candor
Warning they will repeat if there is any deceit
Trial and error is often bittersweet change from concrete 
Tentative evaluation of personal standards

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Written 2-10-2016

4x4 Word Pairing Master Rhyme Contest by Silent One
Word Pairing - Trial and Error
Second Place

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Kp Nunez February 12, 2016 at 6:56 PM There's a wealth of wisdom in your lines, Susan. Congrats on a wonderful win! Susan Gentry February 13, 2016 at 7:28 AM Thank you Kim. You're very sweet.

Anisha Dutta February 12, 2016 at 11:48 AM Nice Poem. Congrats Susan to win. Anisha D Susan Gentry February 13, 2016 at 7:26 AM Thank you Anisha!

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2016 at 7:23 AM Nice reply

Daniel Turner February 12, 2016 at 6:32 AM back to say congratulations, Susan. This fantastic write placed you well in the contest as I knew it would. Well deserved for a very difficult challenge. Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 8:00 AM Thanks so much Daniel! Appreciate your comment. Yes it was a difficult one. They're fun! I know hardly anything about poetry so these are very educational. Yours was an excellent entry also.

Judy Konos February 12, 2016 at 6:24 AM Big 7...Congratulations Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 7:25 AM Ahhh thank you Judy! You just put the icing on the cake! :)

Poet Destroyer A February 11, 2016 at 10:35 PM SUSAN, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA** Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:45 AM Ahhh Thank you Linda! :)

Sandra Haight February 11, 2016 at 10:32 PM Very well written with great wisdom, Susan! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:44 AM Thank you Sandra! Hugs :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2016 at 9:20 PM Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Susan. Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:42 AM Thanks so much Dr.! Very kind of you.

Ralph Sergi February 11, 2016 at 5:19 PM Hi Susan: wow! You have risen above the challenge Congrats on winning high! Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:41 AM Thank you Ralph for stopping by and reading and for such an awesome comment!

Jan Allison February 11, 2016 at 4:35 PM many congrats Susan this was quite a challenge Silent one set us:-) hugs jan xx Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:37 AM Yes it was! Thank you so much and congratulations again to you! :) Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2016 at 3:44 PM I see congratulations are in order. That was a really hard challenge, wasn't it? WEll done! Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:35 AM Yes it was! A lot of fun too though. Thank you Andrea!

Paul Callus February 11, 2016 at 5:41 AM You sure managed to rise up to the challenge, Susan! I can easily see this one on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:31 AM Thank you Paul! :)

Daniel Turner February 10, 2016 at 4:46 PM Well done on a very difficult challenge indeed. Susan Gentry February 12, 2016 at 5:30 AM Thanks Daniel! :)