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Chandelier

grand ballroom dance of swarovski crystals — cracks in the ceiling
7/19/2020 Haiku or Senyru Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 8/2/2020 5:06:00 AM
lovely, congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 7/29/2020 4:54:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my senryu contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Constance xx
Date: 7/28/2020 12:07:00 PM
Wow! What a creative perspective on a beautiful chandelier Kim. Congratulations on your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/28/2020 3:40:00 AM
A beautiful verse. Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, Patri!
Date: 7/27/2020 1:23:00 AM
Such a wonderful write. I can imagine the cracks on the ceiling.;-) Congratulations on your great win Kim mam:-) Keep inspiring.Warmest regards~Deepa
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2020 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, V.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:34:00 PM
A refreshing theme of a different dance...Your chandelier cracked the podium stand.. Congrats Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2020 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish! A clever comment! Be blessed!
Date: 7/26/2020 7:35:00 PM
ohhhh, we see where this is going. you did a GREAT job with this, Kim. Congrats on the win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2020 4:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet friend!
Date: 7/26/2020 4:09:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 7/26/2020 3:58:00 PM
such amazing imagery Kim:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan!
Date: 7/26/2020 3:54:00 PM
A beautiful senryu, Kim, but I am worried about those ominous cracks!!:) Congratulations on your podium finish. Regardes // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 5:21:00 PM
I know!
Date: 7/26/2020 11:28:00 AM
- Kim, congratulations on your great senyru :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 7/23/2020 7:34:00 PM
I instantly visualize that.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 8:43:00 PM
I don’t often think about chandeliers. The swarosvski’s are phenomenal!
Date: 7/22/2020 4:49:00 PM
Those chandeliers just aren't what they're 'cracked up to be,' I guess... G.L. in the contest! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2020 8:00:00 PM
They are beautiful! I’ll never own one.
Date: 7/22/2020 10:47:00 AM
Precarious situation dearest, Kim! Smartly written! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/22/2020 9:11:00 AM
Lovely image Kim, can see the couples dancing to classical music. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2020 2:45:00 PM
For sure :)

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