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Chandelier

grand ballroom dance of
swarovski crystals —
cracks in the ceiling

7/19/2020
Haiku or Senyru Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Line Gauthier

August 2, 2020 at 5:06 AM

lovely, congrats on your win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

August 2, 2020 at 12:22 PM

Thank you, Line!

Constance La France

July 29, 2020 at 4:54 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my senryu contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

July 29, 2020 at 5:02 PM

Thank you, Constance xx

Aditi Mishra

July 28, 2020 at 12:07 PM

Wow! What a creative perspective on a beautiful chandelier Kim. Congratulations on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2020 at 6:22 PM

Thank you so much!

Patri Venkata Ramana

July 28, 2020 at 3:40 AM

A beautiful verse. Congrats on your win!

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2020 at 4:20 AM

Thank you, Patri!

V. Deepa

July 27, 2020 at 1:23 AM

Such a wonderful write. I can imagine the cracks on the ceiling.;-) Congratulations on your great win Kim mam:-) Keep inspiring.Warmest regards~Deepa

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2020 at 4:26 AM

Thank you, V.

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:34 PM

A refreshing theme of a different dance...Your chandelier cracked the podium stand.. Congrats Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2020 at 4:26 AM

Thank you, Jenish! A clever comment! Be blessed!

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 7:35 PM

ohhhh, we see where this is going. you did a GREAT job with this, Kim. Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2020 at 4:25 AM

Thank you so much, sweet friend!

Eve Roper

July 26, 2020 at 4:09 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 5:22 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Jan Allison

July 26, 2020 at 3:58 PM

such amazing imagery Kim:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 5:22 PM

Thank you so much, Jan!

Paul Callus

July 26, 2020 at 3:54 PM

A beautiful senryu, Kim, but I am worried about those ominous cracks!!:) Congratulations on your podium finish. Regardes // paul

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 5:21 PM

I know!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2020 at 11:28 AM

- Kim, congratulations on your great senyru :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 2:57 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Caren Krutsinger

July 23, 2020 at 7:34 PM

I instantly visualize that.

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 8:43 PM

I don’t often think about chandeliers. The swarosvski’s are phenomenal!

Gershon Wolf

July 22, 2020 at 4:49 PM

Those chandeliers just aren't what they're 'cracked up to be,' I guess... G.L. in the contest! Smiles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

July 22, 2020 at 8:00 PM

They are beautiful! I’ll never own one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 22, 2020 at 10:47 AM

Precarious situation dearest, Kim! Smartly written! Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues

July 22, 2020 at 2:45 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Tom Cunningham

July 22, 2020 at 9:11 AM

Lovely image Kim, can see the couples dancing to classical music. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

July 22, 2020 at 2:45 PM

For sure :)

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