Chance Encounter

Walking down the avenue working on some things that are
on my mind, starting to wonder if I'm just wasting my 
time. Feeling pretty lonely not sure what to do, when I 
spotted this lovely Lady just coming into view. She was 
different than anyone that I had ever knew. She had an
amber glow from her head down to her toes, I wondered
if there is something wrong with my eyes or was it just my
state of mind. Two blocks away walking straight towards me,
my eyes locked on her like I was mezmerized, As she got closer
my mind was racing thinking what should I do, feeling very shy
hopeing a clue would drop on me form out of the sky.

Now she was only three feet away, georgeous azure eyes 
glanced my way, I stood there with my mouth open, couldn't
think of one thing to say. She gave me the brightest smile
that I have ever seen, brightened up the sky and everything that
you could see at least for a mile, such a surreal scene. She 
reached out and gently touched my face, then she simply 
vanished without a trace. My heart was racing shipping some
beats, then I realized an Angel had just touched me on my
face. I felt better than I've felt for oh so many years. I felt so fine
it blew my mind had no clue of what was on my mind. Whistling
a happy tune I walked on down the avenue wondering
If I'll ever see her again, sure hope I do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/21/2011 9:00:00 PM
I believe that angel is in your future Jack, she would be a lucky one to find you. Hugs, Elizabeth
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/23/2011 2:28:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 9/10/2011 11:31:00 AM
Lovely piece, my friend. Hope you see your angel again : )
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Date: 9/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Jack, much appreciated....with love....your mate old Jack
Date: 9/9/2011 2:30:00 AM
Nice experience Jack. Great narrative story. I hope you will see that Angel again! Dalila
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Date: 9/9/2011 3:16:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Dalila for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Date: 9/7/2011 10:12:00 PM
she came to you when you was down and out , touched your face and turned you about.
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:01:00 PM
Thank you sir Louis for your kind comments, much appreciated....your friend....old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 8:06:00 PM
Can't be me Jack, I have grey eyes. Anyway, I sure hope your angel comes again. She would love this poem!
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/5/2011 4:08:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 7:56:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate work..Sara
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/5/2011 4:09:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated.....with love......old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 6:40:00 PM
I really enjoy reading your work Jack, keep writing. Love Alexa
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/4/2011 7:48:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Alexa for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
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