Challenging the Mirror

Deepening my answers
Another challenger awakes
To reveal to me my shadows
To then witness my mistakes

Always I had listened
In close proximity
To self-inflicted violence
To the end of harmony

Casting shadows in the sunlight
I was trapped within the walls
Where a child then controlled me
Until the buildings grew too tall

My darkness took this moment
Of self-deceiving fear
To climb above my reason
And to whisper in my ear

“All shadows are connected”
He showed me this is true
“And whatever you’ve inflicted
Is the dead reflection of your youth”

I woke up then to realise
Several centuries had passed
And all within five years
The walls had gone at last

Deepening this vision
The challenger draws breath
Now walking through the mirror
My shadow exerts the pain that’s left
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 27, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Fasinating how and where the mind can take us. I enjoyed this write. -Alley
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March 27, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Great rhythm and insight. One part that I can really appreciate is "...I was trapped within the walls...until the building grew too tall....." I love it. You know, finally getting out using the big windows in that too tall building. Great job.
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March 26, 2009 at 10:04 PM
a very inspiring write! love the title and the thoughts... just a wonderful piece! ~ Arany
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