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Chalk On Concrete

Two wonders, born into our lives twelve and ten years ago. A girl and a boy, my grandchildren, in the little house in Haw Creek, I held them less than a year old as they slept on my chest, as I walked them up and down the creaking wooden floor hallway. Soft lullabies, baby board books, spontaneous laughter so endearing. Their drawings in chalk on concrete, playing in their yard of all seasons, watching His birds raise their young, being the blessed Lord's creations themselves. Oh, years, can you slow down some? My daughter, son-in-law, and I, we love their precious youth. In the priceless art of children, their drawings in chalk on concrete, etched across our hearts. ~

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Date: 6/25/2024 10:13:00 AM
This touches me as a grandmother, I still hace Eddies first scribblings and many drawinds. They bever eii be washed away, i took care of him afrer MElena went back to work in three months. And it was in my care daily all the time till he graduated from eighth grade.. what a blessing he was….his toys, I saved. As if he is coming back, great pen! Pangie xx
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/25/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thank you kindly, dear Pangie. Our grandchildren bring such joy. I can tell how much you love and are proud of Eddie. God's blessings to you and your family. xoxx
Date: 6/24/2024 2:20:00 PM
And now another masterpiece from your eternally gifted pen, Regina. As part of your evolving genius you now effortless tune in to nostalgia with your timeless poetic capsules. Immaculate. Howard
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/25/2024 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Howard. My grandchildren bring such joy to me. Have a beauteous day of inspiration and blessings. :)
Date: 6/24/2024 1:45:00 AM
Brilliant tribute to your grandchildren. What would we do without them?
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/25/2024 10:44:00 AM
Hi Victor, our grandchildren keep us young, don't they. Endless joy! Blessings to you and your family. ~
Date: 6/22/2024 10:12:00 PM
This is wonderful. Yes, the time of our grandkids' youth races by. We must treasure it.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/23/2024 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for taking the time to read my poem about my sweet grandchildren. Have a wondrous upcoming week full of creativity and inspiration. :)
Date: 6/22/2024 8:39:00 AM
Your poem is a touching tribute to the joys of grandparenthood and the fleeting nature of childhood. Its vivid imagery, heartfelt emotions, and deep appreciation for family and time create a poignant and memorable piece that resonates with readers on a personal level.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/23/2024 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Silent One, your thoughtful words mean a lot to me. Being a grandmother is such a joy. Have a splendid upcoming week of inspiration. :)

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