Chains To Chainmail

First as a kept slave
now damned to the arena
foreboding thoughts drifting in,
premature demise
as I step forward to strike
Into my heart I am pierced
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Amy's contest Jacob. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Nicely done, Jacob. Congrats on your win.
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June 6, 2012 at 7:01 PM
JACOB Congratulations with your wonderful win, In AMY GREEN'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
Guzzi Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 6:17 PM
I like how you did the challenge. Very nice!
Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Interesting lines that you have penned..What arena is that you are entering? Sara
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