Chains of Memory

Sometimes I clear the debris 
Of yesterday’s pain and despair
And crawl to the keyhole
To peek at tomorrow
The sheen pleases my eye

I am about to turn the doorknob 
And step outside but
Chains of memory shackle me
Octopus of past extends it tentacles
And pulls me back
Into the dark I am used to

Written on:04/11/2017
Advanced Topics:memory,octopus,keyhole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 7:19 PM
I really like this kind of free verse . It draws me in and does not kill me with monotony. I love how you got straight to that interesting final line.
Smith Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Hope it's fiction Sara...so well done
Green Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Really cool and so well done for the contest. I liked this a lot. Though the ending does return to darkness, it still is an amazing piece of writing.
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