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Chains of Memory

Sometimes I clear the debris Of yesterday’s pain and despair And crawl to the keyhole To peek at tomorrow The sheen pleases my eye I am about to turn the doorknob And step outside but Chains of memory shackle me Octopus of past extends it tentacles And pulls me back Into the dark I am used to Written on:04/11/2017 Advanced Topics:memory,octopus,keyhole

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Date: 4/11/2017 7:19:00 PM
I really like this kind of free verse . It draws me in and does not kill me with monotony. I love how you got straight to that interesting final line.
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Date: 4/11/2017 10:27:00 AM
Hope it's fiction Sara...so well done
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Date: 4/11/2017 10:25:00 AM
Really cool and so well done for the contest. I liked this a lot. Though the ending does return to darkness, it still is an amazing piece of writing.
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