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Chains

Chains surround me Cover me and hold me down Trying to claw my way free Free from the pain Free from the grief Free from myself? These feelings of guilt and fear ant to remove the from my person, and place them on my heart. Locking these feelings away forever, Yet knowing that is not the answer So I scratch And I push And I claw Heart racing Mind surging Toiling with body, mind and heart My soul screaming for relief Finally a small link begins to break Hope flares from deep inside Spurring me onto new Dimensions of strength With one final thrust The chain dissolves Along with these feeling That plague me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 2:32:00 PM
divine the twists of emotion. for you know the grasp the can possess. after one breaks from the chains... the question is.... does your heart ever "really" rest? the answer lies in the strength you behold. bold words! keep it up
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:32:00 PM
Julie I really liked and found myself relating to this well written poem of yours - wonderful job on this - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:15:00 PM
every emotion shown and describe except for the pleasantries, as long that we recognize are hold back there is definitely hope as long that we're strong enough to release ourselves.
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Date: 8/4/2009 9:42:00 PM
The mind can certainly be that way, at times you worse enemy. Blessing from Moses
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