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Chains

so...
what's it going to be
first or last link...or maybe...
somewhere in the middle

to...
eradicate responsibility
for so much....buried in time...
from start to finish

that...
life's fabric is as
already woven....washed and ironed...
and socially acceptable

so...
everything seems evened
outside and/or in.....life's...
peaks and valleys

to...
hide pitfalls of self and others
linked to one's own chain...of...
lifetime moments 

that...
were filled with error
and connections...echoing...
still through life's fabric walls


stans sand

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Date: 2/18/2021 1:24:00 AM
I am just curious if English is your first language. Nice poem.
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Date: 2/18/2021 6:52:00 AM
...thanks for the reply....oui, anglais est mon...first language except for...un petite francais.......stan sand
Date: 2/17/2021 2:35:00 PM
Goddamn brilliant Stan, open truths in every stanza, I stand accused, remarkable writing, it’s the very base of all humanity, cheers David
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:35:00 PM
...thanks dave....it might have seemed a bit knotted....but who wants to start counting....lol......stan sand

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