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so... what's it going to be first or last link...or maybe... somewhere in the middle to... eradicate responsibility for so much....buried in time... from start to finish that... life's fabric is as already woven....washed and ironed... and socially acceptable so... everything seems evened outside and/or in.....life's... peaks and valleys to... hide pitfalls of self and others linked to one's own chain...of... lifetime moments that... were filled with error and connections...echoing... still through life's fabric walls stans sand

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Date: 2/18/2021 1:24:00 AM
I am just curious if English is your first language. Nice poem.
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Date: 2/18/2021 6:52:00 AM
...thanks for the reply....oui, anglais est mon...first language except for...un petite francais.......stan sand
Date: 2/17/2021 2:35:00 PM
Goddamn brilliant Stan, open truths in every stanza, I stand accused, remarkable writing, it’s the very base of all humanity, cheers David
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:35:00 PM
...thanks dave....it might have seemed a bit knotted....but who wants to start counting....lol......stan sand

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